National Poetry Month 12/30: THE ABYSS in 5-7-5

Celebrate National Poetry Month with us!  Post your own haiku about The Abyss in the comments!  (Go ahead, make fun of the ending — you know you want to.)

Blue water toilet.
Fish that ring back out, Brigman!
You’ll need it later!


7 Responses to “National Poetry Month 12/30: THE ABYSS in 5-7-5”

  1. Trip Says:

    (Director’s Cut edition):

    Take back your nuke please
    Or we will flood your cities
    With tsunami doom

  2. Trip Says:

    Breathing liquid air
    It takes some getting used to
    But you can go deep

  3. Trip Says:

    Navy SEALS go nuts
    It’s up to oil people
    To rig up the win

  4. Trip Says:

    Hurricane above
    Strange occurrences below
    We get triple pay

  5. Liz Says:

    Trip has said it all!
    What is there that I can add?
    It was a cute film!

  6. Jim Says:

    When all hope seems lost
    Cheesy creatures save the day
    Deus ex machina

  7. megwood Says:

    Best of Facebook contributions:

    Mary Eliza-
    beth Mastrantonio is
    almost a haiku.

    watching ed harris
    dive, ever deeper, air-less
    gave me a headache.

    Kindly aliens
    Had glow-y neon spaceship
    That resembled Vegas strip.

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